I am the bee to your flower
desperate to find the nectar
to touch you, taste you
Your eyes, your soul
beckoning me to dive
And I yearn to fall
to plummet
How can I know you?
© www.mypastmademe.com 2011
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I am the bee to your flower
desperate to find the nectar
to touch you, taste you
Your eyes, your soul
beckoning me to dive
And I yearn to fall
to plummet
How can I know you?
© www.mypastmademe.com 2011
this is beautiful..
join us today.
Cheers.
Hi Jingle, I will be back … just not great at organising my time 😦 Do I have to wait for another invite to join the Rally? Still not sure how things work if you can help! 🙂
A lovely little romantic and something awfully sweet about the last line. Nicely done.
Thank you 🙂
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ah! unrequited love, the yearning for someone…I so don’t wish for that to happen again. I hope if and when I meet someone, the attraction and yearning would be mutual 🙂
I enjoyed the penning my dear 🙂
Mmm, I’m not in any hurry either! lol The connection was so strong on my part that I didn’t realise it was one-sided until I started to sort myself out … then it became very clear, very quickly 😦 The mind does funny things sometimes … Thanks for the positive comments 🙂
The last line is interesting. Is it “how can I know you” as in how can I bear to know you, or “how can I know you” as in, is there some other way than plummeting to god knows where?
It was written about someone … at that time I literally felt that I knew this person, inexplicably. So the last line was my confusion at how I could feel so connected; how could that be? Bit of an unrequited love thing; they never knew how deeply I felt things and I didn’t have the courage to tell them for fear of rejection. 🙂
Maybe wait, for fate to play its part?
Ah this is opening a can of worms! lol To me, fate is something you can’t change (even the bad), whereas destiny you can (my strange mind maybe?). Waiting … the waiting is definite, the problem is believing that there is anyone worth waiting for any more. This is where the learning comes in … learning to be fulfilled with what I have, learning to live in the present, and NOT waiting. A paradox! 🙂
care to join my april clambake?
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/poetry-month-clambake-lets-have-some-fun/
blessed is your work!
Luna
Thanks for the kind comment and invite. I will try to be organised with my time so I can join in!! 🙂