No idea!!! *laughs* For Luna’s Poetry Month Clambake (Week 2) 🙂
Another day lost
time lapsed,
the list undone
I need to find the trigger
for tomorrow
locate the pulse
quicken my heart,
my step
Remember that the stars
watch me from the ether
© www.mypastmademe.com 2011
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sorry, I’m a little slow this week!
awards are in. 🙂
Yay! 🙂
Time is most peculiar.
It’s slow, it’s fast,
It’s now, in the past,
Coming up, already here,
Endless, or done, over there,
Planned wisely, already spent,
A lifetime of wondering,
Where it went.
That’s brilliant!! 🙂
Much edifying article, I must say. This post is totally inspirational in its own ways and I am confident that it will even get success in encouraging other people like me.And yes i have bookmarked your site mypastmademe.wordpress.com .
Very kind words, thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy what I post as time goes on 🙂
Oooh. I really like the end.
Thank you 🙂 I want to subscribe to your blog but you’re on blogspot and I don’t know how to do it! Help appreciated please … still a newbie on here really in terms of knowing exactly what’s what, at least I feel like I am! 🙂
its very short and blunt. i like it.
thanks for commenting on my stuff =)
The pleasure is mine 🙂 I’ll be back to read more of your blog when time allows … I’m feeling the crazy feeling you described, lol 🙂
Very nice. The poem is fast paced, illustrating what you are saying about needing to slow down.
Interesting that you read it’s about slowing down … when I wrote it I was thinking that I’d wasted yet another day and need to get a move on! As I always say, poetry is about perception … thanks for your positive comments 🙂
Another reply … I can’t comment on your blog post for some reason … I’ll come back to your site asap when time allows to read your lecture post and look at more of your poetry 🙂